Savio Antonio Vogt

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Deep Ends Of The Sea - Poem by Savio Antonio Vogt

The deep ends of the sea,
are like that of infinity,
if believed, it can be found, not by others, execpt by you and me.
don't worry about negative people and their talk,
just hear it near them, and release it when, away from them you walk.
for if you are affected by their poison, for your courage will be
lock 'ed'.
believe in yourself, even though you are mocked
you wil conquer, the deep ends of the sea.


Comments about Deep Ends Of The Sea by Savio Antonio Vogt

  • Francis Lynch Francis Lynch (1/20/2015 3:46:00 PM)

    A fine effort. Congrats. (Report) Reply

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  • Ramesh Rahalkab (1/20/2015 10:10:00 AM)

    A very beautiful poem, marred only by a few small typos or misspellings:
    line 3 should have EXCEPT instead of EXECPT
    last line, WILL instead of WIL
    Congratulations for having it selected Poem of the Day once again! (Report) Reply

  • Savita Tyagi (1/20/2015 8:51:00 AM)

    Very inspiring poem written beautifully. Brushing off the disdain and believing in your self go hand in hand. (Report) Reply

  • John Richter (1/20/2015 7:46:00 AM)

    Very nice.... The human condition is filled with so many things. Among them are the disdain that comes from other's who demean us - whose familiarity with us makes them feel as though they have the right to discourage, presuming us to be as little as they themselves. Even Jesus Christ noted that He would be ineffective in His own home town for all who were familiar with Him would presume Him as lesser than they themselves. To them He was but a carpenter's son and would never rise to anything more. Yet by spreading His wings kings became fearful that His reign would rob their own. This poet recognizes that disdain, that wretched familiarity, and reminds us that it should be left behind. Valid subject, valid poem. well written also... (Report) Reply

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed Aftab Alam Khursheed (1/20/2015 2:28:00 AM)

    A brilliant poem with strongest message - believe in yourself, even though you are mocked you wil conquer, the deep ends of the sea. must be noted and put in thought welcome such beautiful poem and draw in mind the pictorial words (Report) Reply

  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage Jayatissa K. Liyanage (1/20/2015 1:59:00 AM)

    Very inspiring poem, worth reading several times. Excellent imagery too. (Report) Reply

  • Kenneth Maswabi Kenneth Maswabi (1/20/2015 12:40:00 AM)

    lovely piece of poetry.Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Kenneth Maswabi Kenneth Maswabi (1/20/2015 12:40:00 AM)

    lovely piece of poetry.Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Kathryn Mahan Kathryn Mahan (1/21/2014 10:48:00 AM)

    Beautiful... thank you :) (Report) Reply

  • Simon Samuda (1/21/2014 7:44:00 AM)

    I like this poem, resonates very much with my circumstances. (Report) Reply

  • Padmanabhan Ananth Padmanabhan Ananth (1/21/2014 2:03:00 AM)

    Good one, Savio. Liked the rhymes and reasons. Keep it coming! (Report) Reply

  • Jasbir Chatterjee Jasbir Chatterjee (1/21/2014 1:38:00 AM)

    Simply loved this poem, especially the last part, believe in yourself, even though you are mocked
    you wil conquer, the deep ends of the sea. Congrats, Savio! This poem does indeed deserve to be the poem of the day (Report) Reply

  • Nicholle Gibson Nicholle Gibson (1/20/2014 10:21:00 PM)

    nice ink, really enjoyed it, an it was comforting, thank you (Report) Reply

  • Maya Hanson (1/20/2014 10:48:00 AM)

    I like this- good write and engaging. thank you!
    ~mye3 (Report) Reply

  • Babatunde Aremu Babatunde Aremu (1/20/2014 6:11:00 AM)

    A highly motivating poem, very optimistic and encouraging. Great job! (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra Gajanan Mishra (1/20/2013 1:46:00 AM)

    You will conquer the deep ends of the sea. good write.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir Naseer Ahmed Nasir (2/9/2009 2:22:00 AM)

    A nice short poem with a wise message. Very inspirational as Bonnie said. (Report) Reply

  • Bonnie Collins (2/7/2009)

    A very inpirational write.....

    Bonnie (Report) Reply

  • Ana Zaldivar (2/6/2009 11:46:00 PM)

    Nice short romantic poem. nicely written (Report) Reply

  • Anjali Sinha (2/5/2009 7:40:00 AM)

    a nice philosophical poem
    ++++10
    thanks for sharing
    anjali (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 30, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, December 30, 2011


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