The deep ends of the sea,
are like that of infinity,
if believed, it can be found, not by others, execpt by you and me.
don't worry about negative people and their talk,
just hear it near them, and release it when, away from them you walk.
for if you are affected by their poison, for your courage will be
lock 'ed'.
believe in yourself, even though you are mocked
you wil conquer, the deep ends of the sea.
nice ink, really enjoyed it, an it was comforting, thank you
Simply loved this poem, especially the last part, believe in yourself, even though you are mocked you wil conquer, the deep ends of the sea. Congrats, Savio! This poem does indeed deserve to be the poem of the day
Good one, Savio. Liked the rhymes and reasons. Keep it coming!
A very beautiful poem, marred only by a few small typos or misspellings: line 3 should have EXCEPT instead of EXECPT last line, WILL instead of WIL Congratulations for having it selected Poem of the Day once again!
Very inspiring poem written beautifully. Brushing off the disdain and believing in your self go hand in hand.
Very nice.... The human condition is filled with so many things. Among them are the disdain that comes from other's who demean us - whose familiarity with us makes them feel as though they have the right to discourage, presuming us to be as little as they themselves. Even Jesus Christ noted that He would be ineffective in His own home town for all who were familiar with Him would presume Him as lesser than they themselves. To them He was but a carpenter's son and would never rise to anything more. Yet by spreading His wings kings became fearful that His reign would rob their own. This poet recognizes that disdain, that wretched familiarity, and reminds us that it should be left behind. Valid subject, valid poem. well written also...
A brilliant poem with strongest message - believe in yourself, even though you are mocked you wil conquer, the deep ends of the sea. must be noted and put in thought welcome such beautiful poem and draw in mind the pictorial words
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A highly motivating poem, very optimistic and encouraging. Great job!