Deep State Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Deep State

Rating: 5.0


People are locked down behind the walls,
Cannot orate in the open large halls,
It's too dangerous to peep,
Inside everything invisible and deep,
Democracy couldn't stand up it still crawls.

Executive, Judiciary, or legislature the three pillars,
Whenever hot are subjected to the cooling chillers,
No, it's not about Pakistan,
Here we have driven away Satan,
Here everything is fine no robbers and no killers.

Sunday, October 25, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Douglas Scotney 25 October 2020

i like the irony, Akhtar Jawad

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Gajanan Mishra 25 October 2020

Thanks sir, beautifully you have written

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Varsha M 25 October 2020

A beautiful thought provoking behavior. Thank-you sir. Inside everything invisible and deep, Democracy couldn't stand up it still crawls.... very well concieved and said democracy in illusion actually never expressed. It's only when you know each other No, it's not about Pakistan, Here we have driven away Satan, ....in view of hot and chillers it's actually abut driving out Satan. Very well penned sir.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 October 2020

its so nice to see sir ye poetically speak glad you r back within 500 hope they will keep u in as long as long as long to ppme ph could belong belong belong ding dong

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Bri Edwards 27 October 2020

It seems, at least in one way, Pakistan is 'lucky'! supper time; gotta go, my friend. bri :)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 October 2020

A well crafted poem. Truly magnificent.5 stars*****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 October 2020

A poem of great depth. Incisive thoughts that are thought provoking. " Democracy couldn't stand up it still crawls." Brilliant line from a great poem. Yes, there is no freedom if democracy still crawls. Top Marks! To my Poem List.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 25 October 2020

Lovely poem. Yah its not about Pakistan. Ummm....one good thing about Covid is that its making us realise that we are all vulnerable Fellow Humans. I hope this realisation will endure long after the pandemic. One people one race one destiny in a variety of beautiful colours. Great poem Sir.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 October 2020

A perceptive write sir! Democracy crawls..keen observation! Liked it. Top 🌟

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