Departure Delayed? Poem by Dan Reynolds

Departure Delayed?



I caught a thread upon a nail, unravelling my thoughts
of flashing lights and siren's wail and children in their cots
Of such urbane banality with apathetic gaze
each Zombie-esque fatality adds more to the malaise.

' I cannot live this city life, this claustrophobic cloak,
The 'Gun' has now replaced the 'knife', the scum replace the common folk.
I cannot bear to raise a child amongst such filth and fear
I sense, your mother will go wild, on her return when we're not here.
What Promised Land awaits we two, what scant reward and praise?
What horrors wait for me and you, what plagues to wreck our woeful days? '

I took the pillow from the bed. Approached. 'You sleep so soundly, Jack.'
That smile stunned, as you turned your head.
Disturbed, I put the pillow back.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 12 August 2011

Impressive! A very touching, well penned and poignant! I love its imagery and rhyme! 10+++ well deserved! Keep inspiring the World with your talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ....

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Tai Chi Italy 29 July 2011

A beautiful rhythm and rhyme, pity about the world you described! lol Jack of break of hearts! As you will see it was time for me to depart. See you at writerscafe Smiling at you Tai x

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