Difference Poem by Maria Shipka

Difference

Rating: 5.0


Your and my life consist
of a much long checklist,
Of concernes, events and acts
which surprises us, and attracts.

Betwen them we try to divide
the time which was provided.
Our fields are mostly so far,
but some spheres are similar.

Even at sight so same they´re
closer investigationt uncover
differance at focus and depth
as different as hearts of us both.

(c) shipka

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 February 2010

Our fields are mostly so far, but some spheres are similar......differences mqay persist and stay tehre but we should concentrate on some of the spheres which are similar... lovelycrafted poem....10 read mine, , , what next? .. parting ways

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Siddharth Singh 25 November 2009

Hearts so different, yet so close. A good write.

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Vinod Kumar 17 November 2009

Nice Understanding poem, if all follows these methods there were no questions and quarrel, thanks for sharing,10+

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Afzal Shauq 13 November 2009

Even at sight so same they´re closer investigationt uncover differance at focus and depth as different as hearts of us both. very sweet poem..written perfectly and its quite meaningful and inspiring..personally liked it much 10/10

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