along the
midnight sky
i look for
our star
suddenly
i realize
each one
contains you
I know that woman, too. Elegantly expressed tribute to the ONE. Don
Talking about your 'lines'..... This certainly looks like one of em. Now where's my notebook? ..... Paul.
A fine example of a so-called Haiku but ignoring the arbitrary syllable count for the sake of an English poem. Very nice.
Perfect example of how a thought becomes poetry.. beautiful. Yuri
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very nice...simple but elegant...Coach