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sagar patil.

Rookie - 2 Points (03/06/1990 / maharashtra, india)

Distance from you..

It's better to have distance from your memories,
it makes living tough,
This is that rain, that gives barrenness,
what'll one get by getting drenched,
when you don't wish for me,
where do I have a wish to have you..

I search in the paths
whenever I pass some place,
meet me some time by mistake,
show my eyes your face some time..
whenever I hear any sound of steps,
I shift my eyes to the door,
It shouldn't happen that-
you don't even come n meet me..

Without you I am alone,
I am a moment broken from time..
Don't punish me like that,
Forget my mistakes..

Why do I hope this,
Why do I think this..
I wish that you call me (back) ..
If I am angry...

i l u mgh

Submitted: Saturday, June 29, 2013
Edited: Saturday, June 29, 2013

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Kasia Fedyk (7/13/2013 2:42:00 AM)

    How beautiful Sagar! It is such pleasure to read your poems, so soulful and heart felt. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 781 Points Thomas A Robinson (7/7/2013 3:04:00 PM)

    Memories are the dead end streets we find we have turned into on our journey through life.Some we find
    are short and sweet and are easily backed out of.
    Others are dead ends we turn into and seemingly become lost in and show no way out.
    Your distance is best for your memory can have no solutions that benifit you.
    Put as much distance between you and this memory for a healthy recovery and proceed on your
    journey through life. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 812 Points Unwritten Soul (7/6/2013 1:15:00 PM)

    Wonderful poem, so lovely, beautiful and great...i follow your emotion lines with so smooth and nice..great work dear Sagar_Soul (Report) Reply

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