sagar patil.

Rookie - 2 Points (03/06/1990 / maharashtra, india)

Distance From You.. - Poem by sagar patil.

It's better to have distance from your memories,
it makes living tough,
This is that rain, that gives barrenness,
what'll one get by getting drenched,
when you don't wish for me,
where do I have a wish to have you..

I search in the paths
whenever I pass some place,
meet me some time by mistake,
show my eyes your face some time..
whenever I hear any sound of steps,
I shift my eyes to the door,
It shouldn't happen that-
you don't even come n meet me..

Without you I am alone,
I am a moment broken from time..
Don't punish me like that,
Forget my mistakes..

Why do I hope this,
Why do I think this..
I wish that you call me (back) ..
If I am angry...

i l u mgh

Poet's Notes about The Poem

ms u mgh

Comments about Distance From You.. by sagar patil.

  • Rookie - 202 Points Indranil Bhaduri (7/20/2013 4:40:00 AM)

    Beautiful and passionate... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Kasia Fedyk (7/13/2013 2:42:00 AM)

    How beautiful Sagar! It is such pleasure to read your poems, so soulful and heart felt. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Robinson (7/7/2013 3:04:00 PM)

    Memories are the dead end streets we find we have turned into on our journey through life.Some we find
    are short and sweet and are easily backed out of.
    Others are dead ends we turn into and seemingly become lost in and show no way out.
    Your distance is best for your memory can have no solutions that benifit you.
    Put as much distance between you and this memory for a healthy recovery and proceed on your
    journey through life. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,667 Points Unwritten Soul (7/6/2013 1:15:00 PM)

    Wonderful poem, so lovely, beautiful and great...i follow your emotion lines with so smooth and nice..great work dear Sagar_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 54,510 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/29/2013 4:05:00 AM)

    forget my mistakes, good poem, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 29, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 29, 2013

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