Treasure Island

sagar patil.

(03/06/1990 / maharashtra, india)

in love

one heart wins in love
while other loses
every heart is chess place in love
one heart proud in love
while the other is in piece due to grief
every heart is chess place in love
for some it is the will of god
while for others its a punishment
both of its aspects are different
love is fun

for some love is a necklace of thorns
while for other it is
a drizzle
for some its grief of
heart like a spark
while other have spring
celebration in there destiny
when does it some look?
it is sunlight for a single moment
& then its fog the next

one heart wins in love
while other loses
every heart is chess place in love

its a bright morning for some
while for someone else
it is a sour tounge
both of its aspects are different
love is fun

Submitted: Friday, August 31, 2012

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  • Elizabeth Padillo Olesen (10/2/2012 2:24:00 PM)

    What makes a poem a good poem, I believe, is the use of clear concrete images which can contribute to the building up of the writer's message. I think this is one area which is really good in your poem here. Keep on writing. (Report) Reply

  • Lalit Kumar Deb (9/8/2012 1:25:00 PM)

    There is no winning or losing, nor pleasure and pain in love. Love should not be confused with lust, where selfishness, pleasure and desire rule. Love is sacrifice and an eternal state of bliss. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath (9/1/2012 11:14:00 AM)

    Love is very mysterious. None can force it. It's an unpredictable experience with multishades. For someone it's sweet, for other bitter. Really. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (8/31/2012 1:27:00 PM)

    The essence of the feelings really important to awake the sensation, as if love in the sun is the shine, it give powers to bright in the dime if the sun lost it, cold and dark, that will surround us...if the love from the sun touch the moon, so awake the soul of the moon to bright the night with a touch of sun's love....when hearts understand of different souls to be one misty body, complimentary is important to fit what it can touch, as can endure the pain it should cost....after all love is a part of mystery as it involve invisible, ethereal body_Unwritten soul (Report) Reply

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