Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 18,388 Points (17.03.1965)

Do Not Cloud Your Mind With Sorrow - Poem by Lyn Paul

You must repair from love
You must repair from loss, from death
You need to breathe
To take a breath
The pain of losing is so hard to bare
In death, in love, only time can repair
You need to know that you will heal
You have to know that life, turns like a wheel
A wheel of fortune until tables are turned
Fortune now lost, lessons now learnt
These Life's lessons cause pain
But you must, get out, get out in the rain
Each drop, each tear, each rainy day
Is a step closer to repairing, there is a way
The wheel of life will take many a different turn and you have to survive
Rebuild life
Find who you are and what you are able to do
The wheel of life will turn again for you
So Do Not Cloud Your Mind With Sorrow
There will be... A new tomorrow

Copyright Reserved May 2014

Topic(s) of this poem: hope, inspiration, love and loss, sorrow

Poet's Notes about The Poem

We can grow from sorrow, however painful today... there is new hope in tomorrow.

Comments about Do Not Cloud Your Mind With Sorrow by Lyn Paul

  • Rookie - 119 Points Londizwi Shezi (4/22/2015 1:54:00 PM)

    Wow that was a brilliant poem there Lyn (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (1/27/2014 8:28:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Lyn. Very true said Do not cloud your mind with sorrow.. Overcome pain and loss....Only hope in tomorrow can make us do so. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,656 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/17/2014 8:46:00 PM)

    Mighty in motivation and powerful in philosophy! Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,463 Points Hazel Durham (1/16/2014 9:18:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem, with such wisdom to know that time will bring new hope and experiences to take away the pain and hold it as a candle of the light that was part and still is your life! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,679 Points Valerie Dohren (1/15/2014 2:12:00 PM)

    Beautiful Lyn, very good and wise advice. We all experience sorrow in life, but life goes on and time heals - mostly. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,267 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (1/13/2014 2:04:00 AM)

    so warmly inspiring Lyn that it heals the hurting times I'm passing through. great write indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,756 Points Amitava Sur (1/13/2014 1:58:00 AM)

    Very well said, ultimately the sorrows & pains does not beget any thing in return excepting drowning the body & mind in a fearful abyss. Lyn you gave a nice guide line. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 12, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 12, 2015

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