Treasure Island

Dom Hunt

(17/04/1966 / geelong)

Do You Miss Me


Do you miss me
Do you miss me as I miss you
Do days seem to blur 
Were all you do means nothing
Day or night doesn't matter
Awake or sleep
Still all the same
Do you miss me
Do you miss me as I miss you
Does your heart throb in pain
no longer a part of you
Floating on your emotions
Fragile weak
Do you miss me 
Do you miss me as I miss you
Is your breath labored  
The air tastes bitter
Stale in memories
Gasping
Do you miss me
Do you miss me as I miss you
To feel the emptiness
As you turn in bed
Reaching for
Nothing 
Do you miss me
Do you miss me as I miss you
Does your soul feel empty
Restless in the unknown
Troubled
Confused
 Do you miss me
Do you miss me as I miss you
Does the sun bring no joy
Smiles all around
Only cloud your day
Darkness
Do you miss me
Do you miss me as I miss you
Look about searching
For just a glimpse
Of me
Maybe
Do you miss me
Do you miss me as I miss you
Do your dreams replay
Over and over again
Moments that mattered
Moments of joy
Do you miss me
Do you miss me as I miss you
Think of soft kisses
That covered all
Warm caress
Peace
Do you miss me
Do you miss me as I miss you
Voice that echos
Through all things
Words of care
Of love
Do you miss me as I miss you

Submitted: Friday, August 17, 2012
Edited: Friday, August 17, 2012

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  • Liliana Roman (9/9/2012 8:19:00 PM)

    oh my goodness! i loved it! i almost cried for the lost love! i love your repetition, it really drives the point home. this totally deserves a 10! (Report) Reply

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