Do You Remember? Poem by Heather Burns

Do You Remember?

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Do you remember
our days in the
sun
Heat penetrating
us
hot and passionate
yet so young and
naive

the rain gently
falling
touching our faces
refreshing in its
wetness
stopping to embrace
clinging to each
other

as a leaf clings to
the branch
refusing to let go
oh.!
the days of our
youth
now just a memory

do you remember?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 August 2013

Remembering the days of youth. Beautifully recollected. Thank you.

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Mohabeer Beeharry 26 August 2013

Everything leaves in this world. Nothing remains behind. Only the memory. Only from there we could recall a few grains of happiness I love this tender poem. Mohabeer Beeharry

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Queeny Gona 25 August 2013

Oh yeah! I do remember my energytic childhood and the beautiful dreams associated with it. A lovely poem that reminded my good golden days dear ma'am!

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Queeny Gona 25 August 2013

Oh yeah! I do remember my energytic childhood and lovely memories associated with it! Lovely write ma'am.

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Ramesh Rai 25 August 2013

very nice. if time could be stopped. every moment is left behind

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 25 August 2013

I do Heather, as I read this poem, and I feel a painful loss deep down.

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