Heather Burns

Discovery (Revised) - Poem by Heather Burns

under the tree of life
hovering over as a large

from the heat of the day
collecting thoughts

the future cooling

A future
unclear about to be
discovered but not known.

Comments about Discovery (Revised) by Heather Burns

  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/8/2013 1:01:00 PM)

    Wonderful write...Future is full of surprises, always unclear and unknown. Still we anticipate, it will be cool. Yet not sure about it.....Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 353 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (9/2/2013 8:38:00 AM)

    A nice poem of concern on the indecisive future. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,896 Points Hazel Durham (9/1/2013 5:13:00 PM)

    The future is always very enticing as we can imagine all sorts of possibilities!
    Beautiful write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,575 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/1/2013 3:24:00 PM)

    Sitting and anticipating an unknown future. Beautifully expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/1/2013 12:32:00 PM)

    Awesome and wonderful nice and wise presentation thank for share and thank to PH (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,228 Points Thomas A Robinson (9/1/2013 4:20:00 AM)

    Book of life, tree of life, canopy of life
    protecting future thoughts
    growing old
    just discovey
    nothing new (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,862 Points Dave Walker (8/31/2013 3:42:00 PM)

    A great poem, some people think the future is already set, I think
    the future is what we make it. A great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 326 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (8/31/2013 2:47:00 PM)

    poetically presented..good write (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,198 Points Shahzia Batool (8/31/2013 1:59:00 PM)

    life summarized! ! ! wonderful! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 31, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 3, 2013

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