Lora Colon

Bronze Star - 2,760 Points (26 September 1944 / Missouri - United States)

Do You Want My Love?


Do you want my love?
I'll send it to you,
On particles and waves of light;
It will cross the oceans, valleys and hills,
Its glow will light up the night

Do you want my love?
I'm offering it now,
And it's fresh as the morning dew;
I'll mingle it together with the evening clouds
And float it gently to you

Do you want my love?
You need to decide,
You'll never find a love more true;
I'll bring down a star from the firmament's glow
And shoot it right over to you

Do you want my love?
It's straight from my heart,
It's still warm, and if I may be so bold.....
You can use it as a blanket to cover you
When your bed is empty and cold

Do you want my love?
I offer it freely,
You'll never have to beg or plea;
But just remember, I can't live without it,
Once in a while, kindly return it to me

Submitted: Saturday, October 26, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, October 29, 2013

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Comments about this poem (Do You Want My Love? by Lora Colon )

  • Rookie - 55 Points John Brown (10/31/2013 4:11:00 AM)

    Sounds like a lot of love on offer here. A 'lovely' poem, if you'll pardon the pun. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,325 Points Noreen Carden (10/29/2013 8:41:00 AM)

    Hello Lora beautiful poem and a great read and of course love not returned will not survive.Well done (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,243 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (10/27/2013 1:41:00 AM)

    I'll bring down a star from the firmament's glow
    And shoot it right over to you

    boldest declaration of love ever! a lovely song of love this poem is. (Report) Reply

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