Carniz Fatema

Rookie - 0 Points (06/12/1995)

Eid Mubarak - Poem by Carniz Fatema

Eid is fun and great
It's time to celebrate

Eid Mubarak to everyone come on
Let's have lots of fun!

Everyone's going to the mosque to pray
People are grateful, it's a special day.

yummy the taste of the delicious food
Really puts you in a good mood.

Everybody's wearing their beautiful clothes
And the guys are cruising in their
Cool cars on the roads.

Children opening their gifts with smiles
On their faces and having fun going
Out to different places.

All of a sudden the day comes to an end
Well what can I say...
Thank you for a lovely day! ! !


Comments about Eid Mubarak by Carniz Fatema

  • Gold Star - 9,819 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/22/2013 10:53:00 AM)

    'All of a sudden the day comes to an end
    Well what can I say...
    Thank you for a lovely day! ! ! '
    And now I would like to say,
    All of a sudden the poem comes to an end
    Well what can I say...
    Thank you for a lovely poem, my dear friend! (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 731 Points Ency Bearis (11/27/2009 4:32:00 AM)

    Salamalaikum....Happy Eid Mubarak and hope you enjoy your holiday....nice write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Ejaz Khan (11/27/2009 4:04:00 AM)

    Eid mubarak to you too, dear Carniz, have a blissful day, may every single day be like Eid, a good write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zubaida Boland (11/27/2009 3:52:00 AM)

    loved this poem so much.... keep up the good work.... god bliss u.... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 27, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 9, 2010


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