Elizabeth's Consent. Poem by Fay Slimm

Elizabeth's Consent.

Rating: 5.0


Time proved its promise,
................................excited maidens
Everywhere hoping for
....................... knights with amour,

But here was a gallant,
............................ armed with latent
Power to bewitch,
............ swooning she felt so sure

That her virginity forsooth
............................ she gave, prime
Maidenhead forfeited,
............................her cavalier man,
Plain Thomas Bate,
...................... had a passionate time.

Her consent, ere long,
............................ had them planning.
Nights soon were stolen,
........................... raptures had savour.

But proved he worthy,
...................... or was he some knave?

(To be Continued)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Now this is the question Fay. Oh how you can torment us with your talented writing. Must away and look further.....10 love Karin

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Bob Gibson 25 August 2009

Elizabeth and plain Thomas Bate, it seems they did procreate Men in uniform and maidens fair, to the wind they throw all care since the time, in days old, uniformed they're brave and bold what maiden could resist the sight, of a brave and shinning knight? ?

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Tsira Goge 25 August 2009

Fay, Good part, I wait to continuation..10... Tsira

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Ian Bowen 25 August 2009

Fay, nice to read something different. I liked the layout of this piece, and look forward to the next part of your well written poem. Regards, Ian

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Carol Gall 25 August 2009

oh fay getting better all the time

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