Elysian Beds Poem by Joseph Narusiewicz

Elysian Beds

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Mariners breast of sojourn and perfume
Milky love like every sphinx
Pearls and ivory sails
Scarlet worlds give their fluids

You are the riddle
The deep cave of shelter
Emerge from the fruit of magic islands
Vaults of Paris

Fallen and enticed
Please come into my ancient church
My ideals of the great fire gates
No entrance for pleasures of the profane

Thighs of Grecian meteors
Gold as heavy as Minturn fields
Phoebus worlds with heathen steeples
Vaporous visitations from your jewel

Wings like crinoline sighs
Temptation the drama of choice
Engraved with vestures of the sea
Delirium possess the Fellini parade

Grand impression with rows of tanzanite
Languorous soul like luxuries severed
Dream like wines in the Rimbaud caravan
Camels drink the voluptuous night

Sapphires cascade in downy curls
Cryptic kisses are rituals of religion
Furtive wisdom like an opium moon
Elysian beds where purple suns opine

Elysian Beds
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 25 July 2017

Elysian refers to a pagan paradise and beds suggests sleep and dreams, so I take this poem to be a flood - a deluge even - of dreams and visions and visitations of possible or impossible paradises. Who can judge whether a dream is nonsense or higher sense? You take a universal outlook and put all of them in your poem, and perhaps let time sort them out or the later experiences of the dreamer, which will amplify some of these dream-paradises and dispel others. Being wide-awake as I read this poem, I could respond to some of these images in a creative way. For example the references to Fellini and Rimbaud suggest specific visions, like Rimbaud's I CONNECT TWO STARS WITH A ROPE AND DANCE BETWEEN THEM. But it may be better to let the images work their own magic and not over-interpret them. Your poem is a kind of alchemy and we must be patient while the process of refining occurs and not try to rush what moves by its mysterious currents to its fulfillment.

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Joseph Narusiewicz

Joseph Narusiewicz

So St Paul, Minnesota
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