Ted Sheridan


Erroneous Perceptions Of Reality In A Late Afternoon's Sun - Poem by Ted Sheridan

There is just something very sexy
about the way she twists and plays
with that short section of fine hair
on the left side of her pretty head; wrapping
it around her index finger and painted nail
as she glances into her car's rearview mirror
while she waits for the light to turn green
Meanwhile I stare at her in wonderment and pray…
that we are stuck in traffic forever…
The fantasy ends as the car behind me
honks for Jesus…

2008 © T Sheridan


Comments about Erroneous Perceptions Of Reality In A Late Afternoon's Sun by Ted Sheridan

  • Rookie - -1 Points Ivan Donn Carswell (3/23/2008 6:02:00 PM)

    Great poetry gazing at the rear of a future which went that-a-way! Rgds, Ivan (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Dee Daffodil (3/17/2008 8:27:00 AM)

    Aren't fantasies grand? ? ! !
    Hugs,
    Dee (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Chris Mendros (3/14/2008 10:38:00 AM)

    Yup, been there, and, strangely, i don't think taking a picture would make it last longer. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Thad Wilk (3/13/2008 9:37:00 AM)

    Very good Ted, i can just picture that scene now! Thanks for the share! ! *10*! !
    Best regards, Friend Thad (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 13, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 6, 2008


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