Escape Poem by Savita Tyagi

Escape



When mind is just a smoke filled pit
And no thoughts shine through
The hand on work comes to rescue!

Escape
Thursday, October 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kewayne Wadley 30 November 2015

Nicely written! I like what you've done here. Thanks for sharing this creative piece KW

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Akhtar Jawad 09 October 2015

A thoughtful poem.............................................

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Narendra Jaggi 08 October 2015

When mind is just a smoke filled pit And no thoughts shine through The hand on work comes to rescue! ~ Savita Tyagi The cap you've knit Will block the view Of my shiny head, and my bald spot too! ~ Naren

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Savita Tyagi 10 October 2015

Thank you Narendra Bhai. This cap is looking for a great appreciative head.

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