Ashly Raju

Rookie - 20 Points (26.08.1997 / Iritty)

Eternal Love - Poem by Ashly Raju

Dazzled by the sizzling beauty
Of butterflies
I plodded through
Th saloon of the flowers and flies.
I reached a
Narrow dusty path.
Now the garden
Is an unclear dot behind me.
Its trying to attract me
To its inclosure of magic
But I cannot enjoy
These flickering happiness
Which lasts half a second.
I have to reach the love
Which is lullubies for me
I have to reach my grandmom
Who waits for me
With her affectional eyes.
I have to be in her caring hand
Where I find relief.
Alas!
Its dark around me.
The sky turned fearful black.
My vicinity grown
Into a dreadful ebony.
The terror in me
Set its music.
The tears in myeyes
That aimed at the ground
Began to outflow.
I shrank to the edge
Of the track.
Suddenly the lilt
Of sorrow and pain
Was removed by the new music.
That’ s the flying sound of butterflies.
Those seem to be
The footsteps of my love granny.
That sound is nearing me.
The soft hands of grandmommy
Clutched me to her
And her guarding hand
Wiped my tears.
Yeah,
I am in my destination
I am in the ardour
For which I waited.

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Comments about Eternal Love by Ashly Raju

  • Gold Star - 20,924 Points Valsa George (8/27/2013 4:21:00 AM)

    The love of a grand daughter for her grandmother is beautifully expressed here! In her sweet hug all your fears melt away! ! A lovely poem! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,802 Points Heather Wilkins (8/26/2013 3:04:00 PM)

    what could be sweeter than the sound of love granny nearing. sweet and gentle is her touch lovely write (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 23, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 26, 2013


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