Eve And The Promise...(Humor) Poem by elysabeth faslund

Eve And The Promise...(Humor)

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Caffeine pot bleeping, leaves falling,
Chickens scratching, pines sighing...
OH GOD! ! NO! Not sunshine! ! ! !
You reneged! You promised Eve
No sunshine or mirrors before 10a.m!

So what if she had to swallow that bite
Of apple
To be able to speak... she agreed!
A promise is still a promise! ! !
Women...and mirrors...before 10a.m...
For US...THAT'S the sin!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elysabeth Faslund 27 November 2007

Now, now, Ted...swap 's' for the 'v', and the word is SANITY. hehehheheeeee

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Ted Sheridan 27 November 2007

Vanity is the sin...Which is why we get warts.

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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