Eventide Waveplay. Poem by Fay Slimm

Eventide Waveplay.

Rating: 5.0


On empty beach, and listening,
I imagined wavelets playing.
Piggy-backing quietly,
Well-behaved but shouldering,
Tripping-up and frollicking,
Frothy-mouthed from gurgling
They rolled towards the shore.
Nothing stopped their pleasuring
In running back for more.

Lightening breezes in their hair
Releasing gentle wispy sprays
Collapsing in the evening air.
Escaping to their different ways
Percolating everywhere.
Soaking sand then rambling
Between unwary stones
Receding just as suddenly,
Sending crabs adash to homes.

A lonely dog ran scampering.
Began his splashing joyfully
Decided on collision-course, then
Ploughing inward found such force
He barkingly retracted,
Shaking off sea-weedy sand.
Sparklers all around, the hound
Backed off, as wavelets paddled
In for more such wave-play fun
Under evening's setting sun.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Gibson 26 September 2008

Beautiful Fay! you have captured the essence of a receding tide i can imagine in my mind those showering sparkles, regards Bob

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Kevin Eaglesfield 26 September 2008

Hi Fay.Really want to go for a paddle.Captures the essence of something commonplace and makes it magical.Kev

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Ian Bowen 23 September 2008

Fay, great atmospheric piece. Liked the use of 'perculating' and the line 'Sending crabs adash to homes'. Most enjoyable piece of work.10/10 Regards, Ian

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Tom Balch 23 September 2008

When I read this its like being on the beach,10 from Tom

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Fay Slimm

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