Fay Slimm

Rookie - 86 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

A Pure Love. - Poem by Fay Slimm

As the snowdropp sea of glistening white
Envelopes and amazes me, I, standing
Here in a woodland clearing think of mighty
Love. This waving scene of purity hangs
It's every head of gleam shyly downward
In a modest pose, but lift each face and
Look at love so pure it takes us forward
In accepting states of grace that random
Fate never planned, but rather Godly love
Created. They glow with light, and scented
Subtly, are as fresh as dawn. Just above
This ocean of delight hangs, relentless,
January sky which now threatens rain.
Pure love is snowdropp white and gives itself.
I must away but I will come again
To find a presence here which can be felt.


Comments about A Pure Love. by Fay Slimm

  • Donward Bughaw (5/29/2016 8:48:00 AM)


    well-written poem maam. like it (Report) Reply

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  • S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (12/14/2014 1:38:00 AM)


    A subtle great freeverse poem on devotional love. So nice to read u again. (Report) Reply

  • Don Pengilly (4/18/2012 5:27:00 AM)


    I love this poem, thanks Fay (Report) Reply

  • (1/4/2012 2:25:00 AM)


    Gorgeous and elegantly flowing work. I was captivated. (Report) Reply

  • (9/19/2009 6:38:00 PM)


    Look at love so pure it takes us forward
    In accepting states of grace that random
    Fate never planned

    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • Diana Van Den Berg (7/20/2009 2:17:00 PM)


    I lost myself in this poem as beautiful as a raindrop. (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (6/18/2009 7:23:00 PM)


    'Pure love is snowdropp white and gives itself.
    I must away but I will come again
    To find a presence here which can be felt.'

    Nice poem on a pure love.
    Lovely imageries are used.
    Pure love is a heavenly gift.10+++
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  • Smiley Hooker (6/18/2009 1:04:00 AM)


    Tender flowing lines, caressing words, soothing poem of love. Beautiful! : -) (Report) Reply

  • (5/2/2009 12:33:00 PM)


    A Pure Love is a lovely poem.Well written. (Report) Reply

  • (4/23/2009 8:11:00 AM)


    yes it is..... my friend
    the title justified
    nice poem.......10+
    -Ali
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  • (4/8/2009 1:16:00 AM)


    so pure and so true nice work (Report) Reply

  • (3/9/2009 2:46:00 PM)


    Pure indeed. The most beautiful title leads me to to the most beautiful and eloquent piece for which I thank you. t x (Report) Reply

  • (2/24/2009 11:13:00 AM)


    This is very beautiful Slimm and very simple describing the pure love. (Report) Reply

  • (2/16/2009 7:54:00 PM)


    Pure and simple, without judgement to blemish or need to question. A state of grace. Beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • (2/11/2009 11:38:00 AM)


    Love is defined with purity and near to perfection through your visionary eyes... Great piece... (Report) Reply

  • (2/9/2009 4:48:00 AM)


    What a beautiful poem Love of the Gods from which all other true loves are distilled! (Report) Reply

  • (2/8/2009 12:13:00 AM)


    pure love and snow.......beautiful.............well penned (Report) Reply

  • (2/7/2009 7:02:00 PM)


    Such innocuous, delicate flowers and yet, en masse, they transform the consciousness of those with quiet minds and open hearts. Your poet's eye is sharp and focused. Your poet's heart is full. Your poet's spirit shines in every line. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • (2/4/2009 9:43:00 AM)


    A wonderful, spiritual write. This whiteness is eternal.10 for you, my eloquent friend.

    Love,

    SandraX
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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (2/3/2009 3:01:00 PM)


    . They glow with light, and scented
    Subtly, are as fresh as dawn.........................

    as love divine enligtens soul
    heart respires in resplendence.
    as gleams of love by purity,
    yet it flows eternal by exuberance, ..................excellence of love flows by all whitness yet nonearthly, wrought ingenious of divine glow, great write,10+++, thanks for sharing
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 29, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 11, 2009


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