Expecting Rain On A Busy Day! Poem by Ramesh T A

Expecting Rain On A Busy Day!

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Hazy Sky leaving no room for blue colour
Whole day town is drowsy under shade!
Usual business does not stop anywhere;
But nothing in particular touches all sure!

Only if good amount of rain comes here,
All will be happy to dance in rain sure...!
Such a feeling surely lingers in everyone's
Inner heart and wait all for that moment!

Rain in hot day is surely a great pleasure
To enjoy with friends outside somewhere!
Such a joy surely no one can miss in life
Full of monotony, expectation and fatigue!

A sense of relief once in a while comes so, if
Rain comes on a busy day and drenches all!

Thursday, August 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: rain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 27 August 2015

Hazy sky leaving no room for blue colour Whole day town is drowsy under shade Usual business does not stop anywhere But nothing in particular touches all sure - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - A sense of relief once in a while comes so, if If rain comes on a busy day and drenches all.- - - -Only a lovely rain can can uplift the spirit that has been dull and drowsy. Nice flow of words the poem is full of promise for a lovely rain.

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Ramesh T A 27 August 2015

Thank you for your nice comment on my poem, my friend!

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Ramesh T A

Ramesh T A

Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India
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