Express Correction Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Express Correction

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Express correction

I find myself
In safe lap
With no more fear
And silently hear

It is heavenly muse
That makes me to refuse
All earthly desires
That blast with blaring siren

I close the eyes
And try
To seek refuge
With protection so huge

I shall not think of others
While offering
Myself at good service
With sincere promises

I try to rededicate
And indicate
With remorse
But hopefully express correction of course

Express Correction
Sunday, November 8, 2015
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 November 2015

I try to rededicate And indicate With remorse But hopefully express correction of course

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Shakil Ahmed 08 November 2015

ending of your poem is very beautiful, i enjoyed reading the poem thanks for sharing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 November 2015

Persian Khushi Thank you jadia Unlike · Reply · 1 ·

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 November 2015

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Ratnakar Mandlik 08 November 2015

i shall not think of others While offering Myself at good service With sincere promises Very sublimated spirit and ideas. Enjoyed reading the poem. Thanks for sharing.10++

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 November 2015

Very profound insight to the inner struggle. Wonderfully expressed. 9 minutes ago by Ernest Gone | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 November 2015

Persian Khushi likes this. Comments Thank you Unlike · Reply · 1 · 59 mins today

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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