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***************Facets of a night********************
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7.7
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(49 votes)
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Between that sweet taste and your name in her mouth
few moments there were.
The days do not complete..
they are followed by the darkest nights..
hotness of summer followed by drought of fall.
a glance to the moon we could have..
yet before we taste any trance in a waiting night..
the beats' rhymes will be broken by the sun's light...........
a changable creatures we are...they are..
each has his reasobanle and un reasonable seasons..
each has his stages of his ages...
The cosmos lacks stability...
that internal..the external state
are exposed to the windy stromy nights...
In the poets' universe each face has many other facets................
TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .
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Wednesday, June 03, 2009 |
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Wednesday, October 12, 2011 |
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Comments about this poem (***************Facets of a night********************
by
TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .
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Sadiqullah Khan (3/18/2010 3:13:00 AM)
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I have to go through ages in these pages to see what I have written before, if any, Some times it does not matter what is written, what matters is that who has written. You are that (who) here. Add 10 more.
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Sadiqullah Khan (3/18/2010 3:13:00 AM)
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I have to go through ages in these pages to see what I have written before, if any, Some times it does not matter what is written, what matters is that who has written. You are that (who) here. Add 10 more.
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Rafique Farooqi (11/27/2009 10:59:00 PM)
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It is very touching and thought provoking write........
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Rajkumar Mukherjee (10/29/2009 8:52:00 AM)
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Dear TAMARA,
Thanks for your invite to read and comment on your poem 'Facets of a night'.
Its a lovely read expressed in exquisite imageries, laced with metaphorical use and superb vocabs that convey much than is apparent on first read and leaves reader to ponder over..
I liked these lines most:
'Yet before we taste any trance in a waiting night
the beats' rhymes will be broken by the sun's light'
Thought-provoking, profound line of philosophy of life
Loved the poem Rated 10
RAJKUMAR
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Kesav Easwaran (10/29/2009 2:41:00 AM)
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this poem displays a sweet freshness compared to your many other writes Tamara...words fall fresh as dews romantic on the lines of this 'facet of a night'...thanks...10
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Mark Nwagwu (10/28/2009 10:25:00 AM)
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in the poet's world, each face has many facets - much like Picasso's women with forty faces, each of which is real! this is a surrealistic write, Tamara. The cosmos is not stable - and we are worse, volatile even - thanks Tamara
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Rafique Farooqi (10/28/2009 9:40:00 AM)
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Wonderful and meaningful poem, i like this poem
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Ying Escalona (10/28/2009 3:52:00 AM)
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facets of a night
sides of a circle...
'outside and inside'
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Seema Aarella (10/28/2009 3:02:00 AM)
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Oh wow! ! ! ! ! ...excellent lines...last one beats 'em all...! ! ! ! ! ! !
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Marieta Maglas (10/27/2009 1:55:00 PM)
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wonderful meditative poem, very well written
10 ++++++++++
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