Day upon day my heart keeps falling deeper,
into the pain of your sorrow;
Your cruel heart has become weary of me now,
You have left me alone, but your sorrow remains;
Truly your sorrow is more faithful than you are!
Excellent, short but strong.... Well written my friend..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
its painful poet...i can feel ur own pain as u beautifully capture it in ur poem