i heard a knock upon my door;
a stranger's voice, i almost knew.
against the pleading of my soul,
i turned the key, and let him in.
'gather your things, it's time to go! '
'better yet, just leave them here.'
i rose and dressed and took his hand,
and left without looking back.
what we fear the most is sometimes the best.
what's done is done, the curtain falls.
as every creature great and small
looks upward to catch a falling star!
Wow! Eric, what a brilliant poem which caught my immediate attention since I wrote one very similar to yours some time ago and titled: ....AND A FALLING STAR, hoping if time permits, you would read and enjoy! For your Falling Star,10+++ Well deserved! Keep inspiring the World with your talented works! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York! ...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like it a lot. You have all the depth and certainly know how to bring it....Just a few word sure tell a lot............Jim