Fighting To Fight Poem by Crimson Love

Fighting To Fight

Rating: 5.0


My salvation lies in the fortitude...unscrupulious,
the eyes of this being its told see's all,
but I would assume in actuality it see's nothing,
It might see outwardly,
But it see's not whats within the souls of us wretched humans,
war..... politics, what in this world isn't violence?
polititian's words stab at each other, excruciating thrusts,
wars fought by men reaching to control eachother,
when in all reality all we fight for.......... is to fight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 13 October 2011

Bravo! What a trooper you are! A very powerful write that clearly encourages others not to give up! 10+++ It reminds me how I was feeling when I wrote my poem titled: Inner Strength! Keep inspiring the World with more such talented writes! Thank you for great comment about me as poet! I am flabbergasted God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from NYC!

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Stefanie Fontker 13 October 2011

Smart girl. The evolution of man, has been long stunted.

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Dave Walker 13 October 2011

Great poem, and true, fighting just to fight Sums this world up. Great write.

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