Filled With Star's The Sea Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Filled With Star's The Sea



The night and wind that covers me
Soft sand beneath my pillow be.
And sleep eternal waits for thee
Dark clouds my clothes all see.

Monday, September 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: green
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 03 September 2019

and, often a PLUS in my book, it is SHORT! ! bri :)

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Bri Edwards 03 September 2019

ah! and fine rhyming. :)

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Bri Edwards 03 September 2019

Luis seems to be a critic, somewhat like me! ! ! but i try to have at least one positive thing to say about a poem. i don't like Luis's comment, but i DO like Jez's, though THIS reader, me, has NO soul. ha ha. i like the sound of this. hasn't Luis ever heard of sea stars aka starfish? ? i suppose you've found a few in FL, my friend. to MyPoemList bri ;)

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James McLain

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From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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