A raging
fire of hate
descends like
a blanket of smog
Covering people
Sealing their fate
Turning them
into something
to despise
Thus making us
just like them
Hate is hate
no matter how strong
Is this what
the world has become
Thus making us just like them I believe 'us' and 'them' is the epitome of hate, you made an important point with this poem.
This poem is very well written and there is depth to it, I like it!
Unfortunately that your poem is so true the world are covered with haters, i like it so well written!
The power of hate will increase if we increase the hate with our hate to hate the haters, like fire it vanished by contra opponent, water...and to treat the kill we need love, .. a less water cant make fire gone, a less love cant stop the hate walk, but overwhelm love will water the smaller firing hate...love to amplify! _Unwritten SOul
To me, the terrible part of hate is not its existence- for it is a naturally occurring human emotion- but that our culture chooses to propagate it. Great write.
A sad state of affairs that there is so much hate in the world, Good one.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I fear at times the same thing. Then I recall seeing a soldier cradling a dying enemy soldier's head in war and say the last rites for him. I watched medics working under fire during the London riots. I've watched a child offer her last sweet to an upset friend. And I hope. It's a funny old world.