malini kadir

Rookie - 39 Points (17th october / Nagapatinam, a coastal port, Tamilnadu, India NOW RESIDING IN TRICHY)

Fishes - Poem by malini kadir

Fishes serene
Comfortable.....swim
Free these creatures
Swimming wild?
NO! ...in the fish pond
food thrown is man's send
Water changed
Beautiful his surroundings made
Greens provided
Friends to play
Fish in pond
In heaven of its own?
Truth?
A captive for the rest of his life
Even the fish
Pays for his comforts
In kind....
yet how serene..........
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Comments about Fishes by malini kadir

  • Rookie Aldo Kraas (5/29/2010 3:20:00 PM)

    Another very interesthing poem of yours. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Elbert Matt Loubser (1/7/2009 10:08:00 AM)

    Ah yes, hehe very good. Makes me think about people who do not think for themselves and are held captive by the will of others. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,176 Points Is It Poetry (12/8/2008 1:30:00 PM)

    I have a fondness for fish myself any thing for fish...good peace (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 8, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 15, 2014


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