Five Liners 36--40 Poem by Indira Renganathan
Five Liners 36--40
36 Failed Imageries
As rainbow wants to steal the colours
From the lotuses in the lake where
Sun has dived in for a cool dip
Water's steaming up the sky to
Pour down a rain of lotus colours
37 Durga
These trees with many branches
Giving out all emotions dancing their way
While talking to other trees their root-way
I can make out how man got that great concept
On lion Durga arising energized with many hands
38 Repentance
There are reasons many to repent
Committing small to big mistakes
Feared of punishment thereby and
Missing small to big things to feel
One's folly then, so many to repent
39 Fear
Undeniably a natural emotion
Fear causes physical and mental impact
Taking you to chills to cold sweat to death
Yet, fear alone can save you friendly
From diving foolishly deep into an ocean
40 Music
That which is strung and sung is music
A pleasing sound or the succession of tones
In patterned harmony or melody played or vocalized
An art of tones creative and aesthetic in right rhythms
That which is strung and sung is music
The essentials of life you have captured within folds of your verses. That's great.
Five Liners so gorgeous in 25 lines of perfectly worded themes created with a huge intelligence of mind, makes us as readers clear the inside of the great Poetess,5 Stars Full
I enjoyed these five-liners with evocative imagery in all. Well done...
Fabulous Five liners that deserve the highest marks. To my Poem List too.
Very perceptive thoughts woven and conveyed brilliantly. Liked the 5 Liners re: Fear the most. Top marks and To my Poem List.
Very colourful and charming imagery.loved every bit. Full marks and added to my fav
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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This is a collection of beautiful independent poems. I have read these poems with great pleasure. Thanks for sharing, Dear Ma'am Indira ji.