Fly Love Fly Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

Fly Love Fly

Rating: 3.0


Fly love fly find a new nest
Please leave her heart for the best!

Though she cast her spell to confuse
The shattered nest is of no use!

She was like Juliet long ago
Please don’t want her now like Romeo!

Look the sun is now in the west
Please don’t stop your wings to take rest!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kee Thampi 12 October 2011

nice but uncanny see the lines... Though she cast her spell to confuse The shattered nest is of no use! .... must rhy to tear it

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Raymond Uyok 12 October 2011

Love is not to be wasted on the wrong heart; nice couplets, saying so much in simple pairs. I think I love this work.

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Jason Burke 12 October 2011

Cool! Like alot. Keep the keys tapping.

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Unwritten Soul 12 October 2011

Simply beautiful...nice like you always do.. good job Asif _Unwritten Soul

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Asif Andalib

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Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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