For My Dream Girl Poem by LC Ian MckayCarbajal

For My Dream Girl

Rating: 5.0


I believe lust and infatuation comes n goes
I also believe true love creeps up on you really slow
It stops in just to say hi leaving no chance to say goodbye
Catching you off guard and off your toes
And appealing to your eyes ears lips n nose
This feeling is unmistakable leaving an imprint that's non erasable
Once inside you this feeling grows
Through the very blood in your veins that feeling flows

Eventually the feeling will blossom
I can only explain it in one word 'awesome'
And before you know it you breathe for that feeling
Just to feel it again you start daydreaming
But in the end nothing can compare
To the true feeling of when youre physically there
That woman becomes your air
With you my life i would share

This is for you Dream Girl
Ms Independent standing strong
Not needing help form any guy who comes along
Portraying an image of perfection
You're the perfect object for my affection
In my flaws you find beauty
Dream Girl i love you truly
But to call you a mere girl is just not right
You're all woman and you got a grip on my heart nice and tight

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 July 2011

Excellent poem with a very strong structure. Great sentiments and incredible imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Regards Akmal

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LC Ian MckayCarbajal

LC Ian MckayCarbajal

El Charquito, San Luis Potosi, MX
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