Professor Plum


For: She Who Weakened


i poured a poesy
from a jar in a field

full of two-petaled
flowers that were

not mechanical
boxes filled with

churning lubricant,
but she

had on a dead
man's shirt.

the sun was just
coming up, and

our shoes were
covered with dew.

I remember purple
plaid blankets

and her beaming.

Submitted: Monday, May 19, 2014
Edited: Tuesday, May 20, 2014

Topic of this poem: fashion

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  • Gold Star - 15,412 Points Mandolyn ... (12/15/2014 7:32:00 PM)

    i'm serious

    quick sand/toe jam/green bottles/waving
    and i'm going to throw in flight/paring/plug/catapult/Greg

    do it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 97 Points Michael Oliver (10/19/2014 2:52:00 PM)

    A smooth sentimental in the best Iaiah Berlin sense - makes one want to say ah and yet one knows these episodes. Cool (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,412 Points Mandolyn ... (10/1/2014 6:44:00 PM)

    i just read this just now
    and i have to say something positive, is that ok?

    first off that opening line is something i want to put in a jar.
    and
    she had on a dead mans shirt

    dude, you write cool 'n junk! why are you holding out on us?
    i'm about to tell everyone to grab their pitchforks and go after your writing hand.

    GET ON YOUR HORSE! in fact, here's some words for your next one: quick sand/toe jam/green bottles/waving
    DO IT. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,953 Points Chinedu Dike (9/18/2014 5:23:00 PM)

    Highly imaginative piece of poetry. The last sentence l remember purple blankets and her beaming is very romantic and I love it so much. Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 936 Points Unwritten Soul (8/25/2014 7:49:00 AM)

    It does have a beautiful imagery when we really imagine what you tried to say here, poetic expression to me_Soul (Report) Reply

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