Leloudia Migdali

Forever - Poem by Leloudia Migdali

I see you and me together, forever
Walking barefoot on soft seashores, forever
Holding hands under the moonlight, forever
Listening to the silence of the night, forever
Speaking no words, still talking so loudly, forever
Our hearts dancing, tuned in the same rhythm, forever
Feeling each other's presence so close, forever
Merging into each other's eyes, forever
Wondering if this is truly us there, forever
Two hearts, two small islands in the middle of the infinite, forever
I see you and me together, forever!

Comments about Forever by Leloudia Migdali

  • Gold Star - 8,623 Points Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (11/15/2014 2:40:00 AM)

    Two hearts, two small islands in the middle of the infinite, forever
    I see you and me together, forever!
    An excellent poem on the reunion of love and beauty uniting forever to remain together for ever.I enjoyed it
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  • Veteran Poet - 1,660 Points Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. (11/1/2014 7:45:00 AM)

    Hello poet friend Lelouudia. This is another beautiful poems, a true quest in life and eternity. I enjoyed, Loyd
    PS: Please check out my new book on Amazon or Barnes and Noble, Pumpkinny Tales. Thanks for your support. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/23/2014 9:32:00 AM)

    Although love poem a beautiful love poem yet the contrasted with tinge of grief..A dream of yesteryear..a beautiful moment that it is resurrected in dream something like this or the moment of young age; the age of agility SinceI don't know your Biography so can't say thank you..nice poem kudos 10 (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,993 Points Kanniappan Kanniappan (9/20/2014 4:11:00 PM)

    Helllo Leloudia Migdali,
    Forever is an excellent poem. I like it very much. I am planning to translate into Tamil, my mother-tongue. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (9/16/2014 11:58:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem.
    I see you and me together, forever! - - - - - - -Relation must be like this.I adore this thought. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,150 Points Darlene Walsh (9/15/2014 9:50:00 PM)

    I believe in 'together, forever', this is a lovely poem.
    Darla :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,189 Points Tiku . (9/11/2014 6:31:00 AM)

    beautifully done.liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,896 Points Gajanan Mishra (9/11/2014 6:13:00 AM)

    For ever we are one here, thanks. deep love. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 11, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 11, 2014

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