Forsaken Poem by Catrina Heart
Forsaken
'sleep was my first love'
and it meant a lot to me
it waited me so patiently
every time I walked out of the lobby
when hundred moons wiggled on my palms
and billion of stars carol to my eyes
Sleep walked with the thin clouds
Touched me, caressed softly my mind
From the nights I made him wait till dawn,
I took him for granted and he lost his patience
He escaped from the night’s wing
And bloomed to sun’s ranching over the continents
O how I miss his kiss when night fall tease
My bed is empty without sleep
Cold nights are broken, silence forsaken my world
Without my first love……….. sleep
Inspired by the poem: SLEEP – Ratnakar Rout
Sleep - a tease of a lover at times though eh Catrina? - - beautiful imagery you chose with care here......10 and more from Fay
A beautiful piece Catrina..your imagery is perfect...10++
Sleep walked with the thin clouds Touched me, caressed softly my mind So nicely written! ....I loved the way of expression...10+
when hundred moons wiggled on my palms and billion of stars carol to my eyes Sleep walked with the thin clouds Touched me, caressed softly my mind From the nights I made him wait till dawn, I took him for granted and he lost his patience He escaped from the night’s wing i love sleep, if it comes like this....a beautiful poem for readers
very romantic verse indeed.......................
My bed is empty without sleep Cold nights are broken, silence forsaken my world Without my first love……….. sleep ........................ I just love this.I passionately love to sleep..Ha ha..If only I will get paid to sleep, what a wonderful world i might have..He he.. Love this, ganda.. Hugs and love♥ ♥ ♥ Meggie
Sounds very romantic... well crafted Lady Cartina...10points hehaha
sleep was my first love' ........................................ Catrina, it forces beautiful memoirs...10... best wishes, Tsira
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 1:16:02 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A first love just stays with you