11 Apparition
Wind was still..so was the mango tree..no light
Dark new moon night.. hit me a fear spree.. a fright
Crawling a shadow darker than the dark night
Phantom..? 'Fool thinketh...bell clinketh'..fearful plight
Note: 'As the fool thinketh so the bell clinketh' is a proverb
12 The River And The Wind
Tickled by the rippling cool breeze
The river runs sinuous with joyful ease
But crazy the wind grows to beat
The river spews her spitting in angry fleet
13 The Shore The Hill The Ocean
A long sandy shore...a lengthy green hill upon
A deep blue ocean..an eye-catching scene in all
Beauty's beautiful.. yet what's there warning
The blue depth might freak out on the shore and the hill
14 Birds On The Tree
Including the daily crows and mynahs
They are many lighting the green tree bright
As they jjust begin their concerto..' oh yes, yes
Today Pipal is wedding Neem in great delight..! ! '
15 A Poem On The Banyan Tree
Massive and majestic a kinglike queen
With long swinging tresses in airy breeze
Blooming her youth at last births bright red fruits
Oh, a living poem for ages in repeats
16 Snow And Sunshine
Falling on the snow sunshine said 'you've chilled me out'
And the snow replied ' you've warmed me up'. As sun moved away
Snow turned sad hard hit in heart in sorrowful dark
But to appease himself comes the sun the next day
17 Story Of Boulders
Frozen water expands and hits the rocks to crack
Permafrost underneath when melts moves the rocks to break
Cobbles and pebbles and boulders are formed this way
Samples of historical beauty they stand high way
18 Desert
A mark of wounded space in earth's geology
A failed land of sand in earth's agrology
A phase of gruesome strife in earth's travailing life
Where brave people yet live facing hardship rife
19 Coconut Tree
Her usage is as high as her tall height
Root to top.. used highly as her tall height
With her kempt in unkempt style of green fronds
Backing her brown trunk holds her up to the sky fronts
20 Roses
Roses have thorns to prevent predators
But man is wise to use tools to pluck them
Does God hear their cry when cut and crushed by man
Has He else way to guard them from predators
Roses have thorns to prevent predators but man is wise to use tools to pluck them. Does God hear their cry? Loved this insightful expression.
It gives me a great pleasure to revisit this fabulous poem dear madam....Great!
Very pleasant to read the 20 Quatrains with the accompanying interpretations, it draws the reader's attention to what the poetess means.5 Stars Full Score and myriad more, dear Poetess. I really enjoyed it
ever four liners' themes are very crystal to understand; nice to read all through your poetic gist; I enjoyed specially the series '15 A Poem On The Banyan Tree '
True that we cannot set English poems to Sanskrit meters. But with their structural rhythm and exquisite rhyme-scheme, they qualify as Muktakams.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Indiraji, please name the New Form of Poetry as "Muktakams"! They are.
Thank you dear poet for your comment and the suggestion....let me first finish the100th poem in this series as I have done with my one liners, two liners and five liners...
Thank you dear poet for your comment and the suggestion....let me first finish the100th poem in this series as I have done with my oneLater if this series still appear to be like Muktakams, yes, I shall happily add the new name
Thank you dear poet for your comment and the suggestion....let me first finish the100th poem in this series as I have done with my one liners, two linerBut for your information I know only Tamil and a little bit of English...neither Hindi nor Sanskrit I know...thanks again dear poet