Freedom, Free Of Domination Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Freedom, Free Of Domination

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How can I get freedom?
I am a slave dominated by my ego!
Life is a network of none else,
it's me, my and mine.
Still I like this life,
it's my life!
I like my beliefs
I like my culture
I like my nation
I own all of them
they all are mine.
So I do not like anyone else
I like me myself.
I liked to remain dominated.
But love can free the humans,
I love someone who is not mine.

Wednesday, May 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: free,god,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 03 May 2018

Life is an amazing network and we can feel this easily after reading this wonderful poem. Having love for culture and nation is good. God is graceful and he teaches us to have trust. Freedom is necessary and we all need freedom from vices and ego. An excellent poem is shared..10

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A thought provoking poem. One.of the attributes of life is freedom. Freedom is life itself. Yet, we could never have absolute freedom. A great poem with a powerful theme.10

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Khalid Saifullah 02 May 2018

A great poem, love of God is free of ego.

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Kelly Kurt 02 May 2018

Love of self is a priority. All other love flows from there.

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Robert Murray Smith 02 May 2018

Akhtar, a beautiful expression of self that is universal.+++10 Robert

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