OH THE MIND
who remind
is it left..is it right?
who belong to my side?
who could feed?
empty souls? ? ? ? ? ? ?
who could ride!
in the heart .. in the the mind
in the soul
you abide
with no cheer
rusty mind,
want to reach
want to touch
his bride
want to taste ..
and inhale
his scent
who could guide?
occupied!
with the words
with the dreams
is the mind,
with the mate
is the soul
delicate
and with out rusty mind,
how to reach
where to go
how to find?
from the longing
where to hide?
occupied
is the heart..
is the time
and the mind..
occupied..
only one who revive
rusty mind
only one... who could dare
who could dive
of the loftiness
he
remind
from the longing how to hide
that was interesting. i enjoyed the style it was different and creative. :)
i really like this poem...its great, more like fantastic! ! ! ! ! ! ! perfect 10! ! !
an elegant poem slow, but sure taking one to those XTCs from the longing where to hide good write
you raised very heartfelt questions with professional way and done the poem with sweet style as you are known for.. this is a good and interesting poem..and love these lines..meaningful enough where to hide? occupied is the heart.. is the time and the mind.. occupied.. only one who revive rusty mind well written and you got 10+++++++++
It is the soul-mate who can reach and occupy the rusty mind. Nice poem, lovely piece.
a very worthwhile read, something not a lot f people would understand the true meaning of, but no worse off because of that. great job.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very interestng...not use to this but it is a lovely mind that is thinking and deciding with all it's ability! Very fine! BG