From The Longing Where To Hide? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

From The Longing Where To Hide? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Rating: 3.6


OH THE MIND

who remind

is it left..is it right?


who belong to my side?

who could feed?

empty souls? ? ? ? ? ? ?

who could ride!

in the heart .. in the the mind

in the soul

you abide

with no cheer

rusty mind,

want to reach

want to touch

his bride

want to taste ..

and inhale

his scent

who could guide?

occupied!

with the words

with the dreams

is the mind,



with the mate

is the soul

delicate

and with out rusty mind,

how to reach

where to go

how to find?

from the longing

where to hide?

occupied

is the heart..

is the time

and the mind..

occupied..

only one who revive

rusty mind

only one... who could dare

who could dive

of the loftiness

he

remind


from the longing how to hide

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bullion Grey 16 May 2009

very interestng...not use to this but it is a lovely mind that is thinking and deciding with all it's ability! Very fine! BG

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Mona Martinez 16 May 2009

that was interesting. i enjoyed the style it was different and creative. :)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 16 May 2009

Stunning composition, love it with 10.

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Jessica Caswell 17 May 2009

i really like this poem...its great, more like fantastic! ! ! ! ! ! ! perfect 10! ! !

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Anjali Sinha 17 May 2009

an elegant poem slow, but sure taking one to those XTCs from the longing where to hide good write

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Afzal Shauq 15 June 2009

you raised very heartfelt questions with professional way and done the poem with sweet style as you are known for.. this is a good and interesting poem..and love these lines..meaningful enough where to hide? occupied is the heart.. is the time and the mind.. occupied.. only one who revive rusty mind well written and you got 10+++++++++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 June 2009

It is the soul-mate who can reach and occupy the rusty mind. Nice poem, lovely piece.

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Alen Alexander 30 May 2009

another of those different styles, liked it!

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Abby Mackaway 29 May 2009

a very worthwhile read, something not a lot f people would understand the true meaning of, but no worse off because of that. great job.

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Noha El3wdy 27 May 2009

i liked the style its awesome, its meaningfull thanks for sharing

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