Full Red Poem by Randy McClave

Full Red

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Her lips were full red
As though that she had bled,
Seducing him was her look
His soul, she then took.
Her lips quivered to be fed.

She was wanting to be a Mrs
She attacked him with her kisses,
He fell with every kiss that she seductively did fire
He shook and moaned with desire.
There was no misses.

Hisface and chest was red
As though He too had bled,
The marks were left by her lips
Left in small strategized snips.
Her hunger and his lust were both fed.

Randy L. McClave

Friday, November 13, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,lust,man,woman
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 13 November 2020

You have a vivid way of using colors in your poems. Redness is nature's way of signalling passion and danger. The woman you describe is on fire with passion, and her desire has a tinge of aggressiveness. She wields it like a weapon to bring the man under her power.5

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