Gentlest Of Days. Poem by Fay Slimm

Gentlest Of Days.

Rating: 5.0


Soft shushing
................... sea-tunes
Quell the most
............ venturesome.
Harsh voiced noises
..............soothed today.

Foamless
.................the wavelets
Chuckle inwards,
............ each one lazily,
Warming the sand
............and themselves
While round
.............benevolent sun
Stays shining
............. cloudlessly on.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 13 September 2009

it's wonderfully, Fay. 10... Tsira

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Alison Cassidy 27 September 2009

... and here's me thinking your skies were always grey! Mellifluous penning, Fay and the structure of the piece cleverly mimics the waves that wash over your words. Your 'chuckling wavelets' are particularly cute. Gorgeous poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 27 September 2009

Gentle poetry too :) Andy 10

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Catrina Heart 25 September 2009

awesome theme..plus the form topic subtopic type...10/10+++

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Rachel Butler 19 September 2009

Quell the most ............ venturesome. Rachel Ann Butler

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Carol Gall 13 September 2009

wonderful poem written by a gentle poet 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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