Treasure Island

Crystal Castro

(06-09-1983 / Tacoma Washington)


when we first met
you were sixteen and I was fifteen
And at that given time
I had no idea you would mean so much to me
we spent some time outside of school
we even called each other on the phone
you made me feel so comfortable
you made me feel as if I were back home
you were the very first person
to ever make me believe
that I may actually have found the one
to give me that memorable Fairy Tail ending
no matter what may come along
you will always have my heart
you have never gone back on your word
even currently, with us being miles apart
you are my one true friend
in you I put all my trust
we have always had each others backs
and keeping you in my life is a definite must
we both have been through hell
had our share of ups and downs
but it was your words I had carried with me
this entire time you haven't been around
I have shed a lot of tears
yet managed to stay so strong
remembering your words so clearly
like the words to the most meaningful song
you and I and the bond we together have built
had never left my soul or my thoughts
since the moment you returned to my world
it seems as if we have picked up where we had left off
you made me realize my weaknessess
helped me turn them into my greatest strengths
you are the best thing to ever happen to me
I definitely believe that you are my saving grace
my well deserved gift from God
because with you I feel I am the most safe
we have been the best of friends for the last fifteen years
and there are many more years to come
forever you shall remain close to my heart and my life
until the day my life is done
for you I would take a bullet
I would give you all of my breath
and if it really came down to itit
I would give you the beating heart straight from msty chestchest
forever you will mean more than the world to me
and nothing will ever make that come to an end
because GFR I sincerely thank you
you have always been and will remain my very best friend

Submitted: Thursday, May 30, 2013
Edited: Thursday, July 04, 2013

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  • Khairul Ahsan (8/7/2013 2:28:00 AM)

    Adolescent love, the memory and craving lingers on for life! So pure, so innocent. I understand your emotions.
    What is GFR by the way?
    This poem is an expression of pure love. The two souls being miles apart physically, crave for each other. Very touchy, well written. (Report) Reply

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