Crystal Castro

Rookie - 48 Points (06-09-1983 / Tacoma Washington)

Endless Love - Poem by Crystal Castro

Ever since we broke up
I never thought i would say
I still love him
Every single day

Hoping one day we would get back together
Hoping it would be soon
Friend say 'get over him '
But they don't realize, it's easy to say but very hard to do

Everytime i see him
I always want to cry
Knowing we probably won't get back together
And I am left wondering why

Yes i admit
He treated me bad
But not being with him, in his arms
Makes me feel sad

He flirts with other girls he claims he doesn't like
So what am i to think
Now i admit i am jealous
And I'll always sit and ponder 'will we ever be a couple again'

I miss himis so much
He tells me he still loves me
Alot, that is
But this situation is not as easy as it seems

Wondering why we even broke up
Why he treated me like dirt
Seeing him messing with girls
And it's my heart that's hurt

All i have to ask
Is just one simple thing
WHY
And i ask overt and over again

Sitting here in my room
Crying in my bed
Thinking of how much i still love him still
And why our relationship went dead

I can't say goodbye, nor turn away
Hoping we look at the same stars above
Hoping I will soon get over
What i thought was my endless love


Comments about Endless Love by Crystal Castro

  • Gold Star - 25,195 Points Chinedu Dike (9/28/2014 8:04:00 AM)

    The mighty effect of Love endures because Love is spiritual in nature. Memories of Love never pass, they linger, guide and influence long after the source of stimulation has faded. It leaves enduring traces upon the human heart. A lovely poem, subtly penned to capture its essence. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 111 Points C. P. Sharma (9/19/2013 12:02:00 AM)

    Love is sublime, love is not love that alters when alterations finds. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,892 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/7/2013 2:08:00 AM)

    Was he your first love? First love is difficult to forget. Is he the father of your 3 kids? If so, you should try to patch things up. If not, better to love from a distance, however strongly the body desires him. My personal opinion, no offence intended, so please take no offence. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 48 Points Crystal Castro (4/19/2013 5:05:00 PM)

    well I wrote this years ago I forgot to add the date when I wrote this one back in 1997
    the guy I talk about in here we still talk even after 16 years we both are still very much in love with each other better both in different world it happens but we remain good friends (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,277 Points Tiku . (4/19/2013 10:36:00 AM)

    i think with a slight effort you two can be together again.just shed the ego and have a talk with him.seems matter will be ok.nice write Crystal.keep inking. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 2, 2013


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