Girls … 2408-2k12 Poem by saadat tahir

Girls … 2408-2k12

Rating: 3.5


Girls
Lovely, pretty
Chilling, wanting, hiding,
Counters, movies, streets, and meets
Lurking, winking, pouncing
Fairy? scary?
Sexy



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24 Aug,2012
Islamabad

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A Diamante Poem:
A diamante poem is a poem written in the shape of a diamond. Centre justified.
Each line uses specific types of words, like adjectives and -ing words.
It may, but does not have to rhyme
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 09 September 2012

They do not know we call them in so many adjectives.Depicted well Sir

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Poetheart Morgan 03 September 2012

Remarkable! ! ! I did know that! ! ! Beautiful.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 31 August 2012

Young girls flirting? Nice piece.

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Elena Sandu 30 August 2012

Playful write, makes me want to dance, short yet a joy to watch, thank you for share,10

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The Reader 30 August 2012

Ref: Urdu book of criticism Title: Muqaddama - Shair-o-Shairi Per by Hali As against the intuitively revealed poems descended on the heart of the poets, the poems deliberately composed on a specific pattern are equally & aesthetically important and they have their status not less than the revealed one... you have shared a creative effort...simple n light...! you have given the diamond cut typing on the other site...try it here too...thx.

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