Go! Poem by Maria Shipka
Go!
...as the time
slowly passed
something in my heart
forever disappeared...
I opened my eyes
and started to ask:
who really this Man was?
It was one who
I idealized to in my mind,
but in reality it was
somebody fully else...
Was the face,
he shown me all the time,
his really face,
or it was only a mask...
Was the words I heard
from his mouth truth?
Or it all was only an amount
of delusions, insincerity and lies?
I loved him, opened him all my heart,
but he only played
once with me...
once with another else,
of his long list...
I was his slavery,
addicted on him...? ? ?
I know, it was my fault!
I had long, long ago
just at a first time,
I got a suspicion
of his sincerity,
of his Don Juan-ism
leave him...Let him go!
No, no, no!
I don't want more to wait on him,
there is nothing to wait for,
there is no man I believed in,
nothing to excuse, nothing to undo,
all I felt forever gone...
I hope that he´s proud...
Go off! of my heart!
Scram of my mind!
My heart is hurt...
Never more I wish,
to listen your lies...
(c) shipka
I opened my eyes and started to ask: who really this Man was? It was one who I idealized to in my mind, but in reality it was somebody fully else... Was the face, he shown me all the time, awesome, wonderful and fantastic.. this poem seems to me like a sweet romantic short story type poem about the ideal person who is always in dreams but has no face and you are a lucky one you at last found him, the man who was part of your past and now the man of future.. I read this poem few time and enjoy..its professionally expressed and meaningful is alot... a sweet poem from my best poetry friend maria shipka..well done 10/10 ++++++++++++++++++++++++
passion bewilders faster as when betrayed flower loses strength with of no fragrance heart seems to be hurt by the ruse in redness heart seems to be befuddled being bereft of love, yet passion riles on by the guile rocking up, ingenius write,10++, thanks for sharing
if you let him go...he does... he will run..run and run..towards to you
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4/26/2024 11:58:38 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Maria, it`s a great creation... so natural, so easily flowing words which hold the point so tight... I`m against of holding fake relationships even if ur never given anything better. but what`s the point is if u can let go everything fake u`ll be given much and much more. i`d experienced it in my life, trust me. once more, ur poem is great, it has taken 99.9% of the pain and all the rest took our comments. God bless u