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JOSE MURGUIA

(4/14/80 / aztlan CITY OF ANGELZ! (EL MONTE))

GOD..


god is the creator,
he can make your life a whole lot better,
god is beatiful,
he can create a miracle,
god can hear all prayers,
he lives in the heavens upstairs,
god loves us all,
he is not that far just give'em a call,
god won't let you fall,
he will make you stand tall,
god will always be there,
he will always care,
god will forgive,
and in our harts he will always live.


01/19/2009
Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia

Submitted: Monday, January 19, 2009
Edited: Tuesday, September 22, 2009

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  • Carl Harris (2/1/2009 2:25:00 PM)

    Not a bad write, Jose, despite the numerous repetitions. You got your point across to the reader very effectively, and every word you said it quite true! Carl. (Report) Reply

  • Brandon Febles (1/30/2009 11:18:00 AM)

    I simply love it. It what God does in our life if your willing to look for him, thank you for writing this. Its made my day, ^_^ (Report) Reply

  • Greenwolfe 1962 (1/19/2009 8:22:00 PM)

    I would have preferred a stronger last line, but the structure was fine. I likethe repetition. I wish it had more internal rhythm though. Overall, very good.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Lisa French (1/19/2009 7:10:00 PM)

    Awesome poem!
    Yep God sure is the greatest! !
    You sure get a 10! ! Great work!

    Lisa (Report) Reply

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