nader baheri


God, is this the world you have created? Poem by nader baheri


1-The minds full of lust
The minds full of lies

2-The world full of darkness
The world full of dirts

3-The world full of people like you like me
Using beautiful words when we need

4-The world full of injustice
Both in West and East

5-The world full of women who have lost their purity
For earning property

6-The world full of hate
In each time, in each date

7-So many racism, so many contempt
So many people who always pretend

8-GOD,
Is this the world you created

9-GOD,
I am sick and tired of living
there haven't been anything interesting
for me on your earth

Submitted: Thursday, August 30, 2012
Edited: Saturday, September 01, 2012

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  • Rookie - 50 Points A Dark Lifetime . (12/5/2012 10:52:00 AM)

    I love it. So much for the worlds lost innocence. Why do we do this? Why do we pretend? I find this poem very breathtaking and I understand that feeling, those thoughts.
    // Love J.J (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (10/31/2012 3:49:00 AM)

    God gave domion over earth to man.We can only trust God on this (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,881 Points * Sunprincess * (10/25/2012 12:25:00 AM)

    oh God created the perfect world, but man chose to destroy it..so sad but true..thanks for sharing.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hugh Fraser (9/6/2012 3:20:00 PM)

    Wow, dark but good. The final verse in particular is very striking. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 127 Points Allemagne Roßmann (9/3/2012 3:46:00 PM)

    Thats the reason mankind must start afresh in another plant somehow Mars Thought provoking write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 69 Points Hamid Negah (9/2/2012 2:40:00 PM)

    Dear Nader, first of all I would like to apologize to say that is not correct to say the world is full of....The ratio should be considered...Indeed, the more we love, the more will see the beauty... God loves his creatures and we should too. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 355 Points Sina Farajzadeh (8/30/2012 11:54:00 AM)

    Sorry that I have to tell your mistakes. Take it as a friend's help.
    Full of women who have lost...
    Now, my idea. Nader, this poem is fantastic. Very great. The same way that I think. Great. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 355 Points Sina Farajzadeh (8/30/2012 11:53:00 AM)

    Sorry that I have to tell your mistakes. Take it as a friend's help.
    Full of women who have lost...
    Now, my idea. Nader, this poem is fantastic. Very great. The same way that I think. Great. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (8/30/2012 4:19:00 AM)

    again good work love the meaning, there's nightmare in our reality, at times it seems beautiful only exist in broken wishes dream (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 211 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (8/30/2012 3:26:00 AM)

    Full of nice meaning that people should concern about them. we have to wake up from our dream and see the world, this poem is perfect.
    well done. (Report) Reply

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