Gross Deficit Poem by Valsa George

everything around presages an impending doom.... all sweet memories gone.... only bitter memories remain! The poem has succeeded in creating a very moving picture of life. At some or the other point of time we all are besieged by such debilitating impulses. Very touching.

I loved this sorrowful poem! Pure greatness

Its sad, but I have come to realize that its those people who reflect within themselves sadness and anxiety are themselves great people. For only great people are able to encounter pain. Your Balance Sheet Has a net positive, yours is an asset of humanity, and this poem is the revenue of great worth.

The poem stars with such a tempests that I did not see it become an exploration, into your own soul, and the memories left in your deposit are all bitter sweet. I know what it is like, trying to hold onto the happiness of lost moments only to watch them slip away like sand in your hands, and all that's left is the rot of that which cant be lost.

Beautifully Sad, yet beautifully human that these thoughts are a universal malady of all the good souls out there. Your spirit glows so evanescently through these words, the torture of your mind strikes like a lightning within these words you paint, your pain, and its a canvas that remains within the minds eye.

sitting in my dim lit room with all the windows shut unable to drown the emptiness afloat in irrepressible buoyancy I glance over the balance sheet of my life..............so touching with a great theme. It is a beautiful philosophical poem with heartrending depiction. Thanks for sharing.10

Sometimes I feel what makes us humans is that we have memories - good and bad both. I usually feel something between scared and excited when there are storms. But almost all the times once it is over, I begin to have these moments when I wonder about certain parts of my life. Reminiscence is quite the phantom that haunts us. A beautiful poem ma'am. Thanks for sharing.