Haiku 10,11 (Tornado) Poem by Savita Tyagi

Haiku 10,11 (Tornado)

Rating: 5.0


tornado spirals
rain dance exhilarating
far out death drum beats

a dog cries and barks
Crescent moon dips in black clouds
Jasmine fills the air

5.9.2016

Tuesday, May 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: tornado,nature,rain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Oklahoma was hit last night again with tornados. While the death and destructioncaused in communities affected, is always heartbreaking and sad, night becomes quiet and beautiful after storm passes, inspiring me to write these late last night.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Udaya R. Tennakoon 11 May 2016

Cty of the dog gives a internal deep sense to picture that the moment you describe.. very good write dear Savita..

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Ratnakar Mandlik 10 May 2016

Beautifully envisioned haiku displaying an amazing flight of imagery. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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